Personal Statement: Top 10 Rules and Pitfalls from Purdue OWL

Writing the Personal Statement: Top 10 Rules

  1. Strive for depth rather than breadth. Narrow focus to one or two key themes, ideas or experiences
  2. Try to tell the reader something that no other applicant will be able to say
  3. Provide the reader with insight into what drives you
  4. Be yourself, not the ‘ideal’ applicant
  5. Get creative and imaginative in the opening remarks, but make sure it’s something that no one else could write
  6. Address the school’s unique features that interest you
  7. Focus on the affirmative in the personal statement; consider an addendum to explain deficiencies or blemishes
  8. Evaluate experiences, rather than describe them
  9. Proofread carefully for grammar, syntax, punctuation, word usage, and style
  10. Use readable fonts, typeface, and conventional spacing and margins

Writing the Personal Statement: Top 10 Pitfalls

  1. Do not submit an expository resume; avoid repeating information found elsewhere on the application
  2. Do not complain or whine about the “system” or circumstances in your life
  3. Do not preach to your reader. You can express opinions, but do not come across as fanatical or extreme
  4. Do not talk about money as a motivator
  5. Do not discuss your minority status or disadvantaged background unless you have a compelling and unique story that relates to it
  6. Do not remind the school of its rankings or tell them how good they are
  7. Do not use boring clichéd intros or conclusions
    1. “Allow me to introduce myself. My name is…”
    2. “This question asks me to discuss…”
    3. “I would like to thank the admissions committee for considering my application.”
    4. “It is my sincere hope that you will grant me the opportunity to attend your fine school.”
    5. “In sum, there are three reasons why you should admit me…”
  1. Do not use unconventional and gimmicky formats and packages
  2. Do not submit supplemental materials unless they are requested
  3. Do not get the name of the school wrong
  4. Do not incorporate technical language or very uncommon words

Stewart, Mark Alan. Perfect Personal Statements. New York: Simon & Schuster Macmillan, 1996.


References – Senior Portfolio

By now, you should have already asked 3 people to write a reference letter for you.  If you haven’t received, it might be a good time to remind the writers that you need the letter by December 4th.  Remember to be polite and persistent!

Canterbury Dates

Pilgrim Project – due Tuesday Nov. 10 (come to class with finished projects); another way of thinking about this due date – due Monday by 4PM!  We will share Pilgrim information with the class to help study for the final.

Canterbury Final TEST on Wednesday Nov. 11 (yes, vocab quiz, then final test)